
漫画脚本不是带有换行的小说段落。
它是一份制作计划。每一格都需要一个清晰的任务、一个明确的视觉瞬间,以及足够的说明,让读者、画师或 AI 系统理解页面上应该出现什么。如果跳过这一步,生成过程就会变成猜测:一格里动作过多、镜头角度不一致、对话混乱、背景也无法支撑故事。
本指南延续了这个系列:
今天你将产出一个实用成果:
一份包含视觉指引、对白和生成备注的 4–6 格漫画页面脚本。
这份脚本将成为下一篇文章的输入:生成漫画页面。
对于第一页,结构要尽量简单:
Panel 1: Establish the location.
Panel 2: Show the character's normal pressure.
Panel 3: Introduce the trigger.
Panel 4: Make the conflict visible.
Panel 5: Force a choice.
Panel 6: End with a hook.
每一格应包含:
下面是工作模板:
Panel number:
Purpose:
Shot type:
Location:
Characters:
Action:
Emotion:
Background anchors:
Dialogue/caption:
Continuity notes:
Generation prompt:
这种结构通常已经足以指导一页内容,而不会让每一格负担过重。
故事种子可以描述发生了什么。角色设定表可以定义谁会出现。世界观文档可以定义故事发生在哪里。
而漫画脚本决定了读者会如何体验这一切。
如果没有分镜规划,像下面这样的提示就会过于模糊:
Leo finds a robot in the floating junk market and runs from guards.
它可能会变成一张拥挤的图片、一场随机的追逐,或者一个没有清晰顺序的场景。分镜脚本则会把同样的想法转化成可控的视觉节拍:
| 节拍 | 读者看到的内容 |
|---|---|
| 铺垫 | 开阔天空之上的漂浮废品市场 |
| 角色压力 | Leo 当众修理失败 |
| 触发事件 | 一个箱子自行打开 |
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| 发现 | 小机器人重复着他妹妹的声音 |
| 危险 | 守卫的警示灯变红 |
| 钩子 | 机器人投射出一张通往不可能平台的地图 |
这样,页面就有了节奏。

每一页都应该有一个主要任务。
对于第一页,常见且实用的任务包括:
对于 Leo 的故事,这一页的任务是:
Introduce Leo, show the floating junk market, reveal the robot, and end with the map hook.
这句话能防止页面试图承载过多内容。
一个实用的首页结构是:
1 wide panel
3 medium panels
1 close-up
1 hook panel
对于日漫或条漫,你可以调整结构:
| 格式 | 推荐结构 |
|---|---|
| 单页漫画 | 4–6 格,并以清晰的最终节拍收尾 |
| 条漫开篇 | 5–7 个纵向节拍,并留出更多间距 |
| 日漫页面 | 5–6 格,黑白对比更强 |
| 漫画条 | 3–4 格,带一个干净利落的爆点或揭示 |
不要一开始就用 12 格。格数越多,连贯性风险越高,而且通常会降低开篇页的清晰度。
一格不应该同时做五件事。
较弱的分镜目的:
Leo is at the market, fixing a machine, feeling nervous, hearing his sister, seeing the robot, and guards arrive.
更强的分镜顺序:
Panel 1: Establish the floating market.
Panel 2: Show Leo failing a repair.
Panel 3: Show the crate opening.
Panel 4: Show Leo hearing his sister's voice.
Panel 5: Show guard lights turning red.
Panel 6: Show the robot map hook.
每一格都只保留一个核心视觉想法。
镜头类型会告诉读者该看哪里。
可以使用这组简单分类:
对于 Leo 这一页:
| 分镜 | 镜头类型 | 原因 |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | 远景 | 建立漂浮市场 |
| 2 | 中景 | 展示 Leo 在压力下工作 |
| 3 | 细节镜头 | 突出箱子的重要性 |
| 4 | 特写 | 展示 Leo 的情绪反应 |
| 5 | 低角度 | 让警示灯显得更危险 |
| 6 | 越肩镜头 | 同时展示 Leo 和那张不可能存在的地图 |
镜头类型会让生成提示词更容易编写,也让页面更易读。

下面是一份完整的首页脚本,使用了前几篇指南中的故事、角色设定表和世界观备注。
Page job:
Introduce Leo, show the floating junk market, reveal the robot, and end with the map hook.
Panel 1:
Purpose: establish the world
Shot type: wide establishing shot
Location: Floating Junk Market
Characters: Leo as a small figure near a repair stall
Action: stacked salvage platforms hang above open sky while people move across narrow bridges
Emotion: adventurous, busy, slightly unstable
Background anchors: hanging cables, warning flags, pulley crates, open sky
Dialogue/caption: Caption: "The market floated high enough that broken things sometimes fell for minutes."
Continuity notes: keep the market above open sky; use dusty gray, faded yellow, rust orange
Generation prompt: wide cinematic manga panel of a floating junk market above open sky, stacked salvage platforms, hanging cables, warning flags, pulley crates, small repair stall, busy but readable background, no readable text
Panel 2:
Purpose: show Leo's normal pressure
Shot type: medium shot
Location: Floating Junk Market repair stall
Characters: Leo
Action: Leo tightens a screw on a wheezing machine as smoke puffs from the wrong side
Emotion: anxious focus, embarrassed determination
Background anchors: tool bench, patched metal, canvas awning, warning flags in distance
Dialogue/caption: Leo: "Almost fixed. Probably."
Continuity notes: Leo has messy black hair, copper clip, tan utility jacket, cheek bandage, dented screwdriver
Generation prompt: medium manga panel of Leo, nervous apprentice repair kid, tightening a screw on a damaged machine at a floating market repair stall, smoke puff, anxious focus, preserve copper hair clip, cheek bandage, tan utility jacket, dented screwdriver
Panel 3:
Purpose: introduce the trigger
Shot type: detail shot
Location: repair stall floor
Characters: Leo's hand only
Action: a dented delivery crate clicks open by itself beside Leo's boot
Emotion: quiet surprise
Background anchors: scratched metal floor, crate latch, loose bolts
Dialogue/caption: SFX: click
Continuity notes: keep crate dented and old; avoid extra characters
Generation prompt: close detail manga panel of a dented delivery crate on scratched metal floor beside a worn boot, latch opening by itself, loose bolts, tense quiet moment, no readable text
Panel 4:
Purpose: make the discovery emotional
Shot type: close-up
Location: repair stall
Characters: Leo, tiny robot
Action: the tiny robot looks up from the crate and repeats a voice Leo recognizes
Emotion: shock, hope, fear
Background anchors: crate edge, tool shadows, soft sky light
Dialogue/caption: Robot: "Leo?"
Continuity notes: Leo's face should show recognition; keep robot small and simple
Generation prompt: close-up cinematic manga panel of Leo staring at a tiny robot inside a dented crate, shocked expression, hopeful fear, soft daylight, tool shadows, preserve Leo's face details and outfit anchors
Panel 5:
Purpose: add danger
Shot type: low angle
Location: Guard Checkpoint Bridge near the market
Characters: guard silhouettes, Leo at the foreground edge
Action: red signal lights switch on across the bridge while guards turn toward the repair stall
Emotion: danger, exposure, urgency
Background anchors: steel gate ribs, red warning lights, narrow bridge
Dialogue/caption: Guard: "Seal the bridge."
Continuity notes: checkpoint uses red warning lights; keep guards as silhouettes
Generation prompt: low angle manga panel of a narrow guard checkpoint bridge, steel gate ribs, red warning lights turning on, guard silhouettes looking toward market repair stall, tense atmosphere, no readable signs
Panel 6:
Purpose: end with a hook
Shot type: over-the-shoulder
Location: repair stall looking toward open sky
Characters: Leo, tiny robot
Action: the robot projects a map line toward an unlisted platform below the market
Emotion: mystery, impossible choice
Background anchors: open sky, hanging cables, faint silver route line, distant pale arches
Dialogue/caption: Caption: "The map pointed down, to a place the market said did not exist."
Continuity notes: show Leo holding the dented screwdriver; make the map visual but avoid readable words
Generation prompt: over-the-shoulder manga panel of Leo holding a tiny robot as it projects a glowing map line toward an impossible hidden platform below a floating market, open sky, hanging cables, distant pale arches, mysterious silver light, no readable text
这就是一份可直接使用的 6 格首页脚本。
LlamaGen.AI 在把脚本当作结构化视觉简报而不是松散故事段落时效果最佳。清晰的分镜分隔,更容易控制节奏、镜头、角色和连贯性。
你可以使用 LlamaGen.AI 来创建:
先粘贴以下内容:
Story seed:
[paste Day 1 story seed]
Character sheet:
[paste Day 2 character sheet]
World bible:
[paste Day 3 locations and style rules]
Panel script:
[paste the 4-6 panel script]
然后请求生成第一版视觉草稿。不要一开始就要求最终精修。首先检查顺序是否清晰可读、角色是否保持设定一致、场景是否在每一格之间保持连贯。
在第一版草稿后做一次简单复查,有助于捕捉最常见的问题:

使用这些提示词,把备注转换为清晰的分镜脚本。
Turn this comic story seed, character sheet, and world bible into a 6-panel first page script:
[paste story seed]
[paste character sheet]
[paste world bible]
For each panel include:
- purpose
- shot type
- location
- characters
- action
- emotion
- background anchors
- dialogue or caption
- continuity notes
- image-generation prompt
Keep each panel focused on one visual beat.
Review this comic panel script for pacing:
[paste panel script]
Find:
- panels doing too many jobs
- missing establishing shots
- unclear transitions
- weak final hook
- dialogue that could be more visual
Return a revised 4-6 panel version.
Convert this story paragraph into comic panel beats:
[paste paragraph]
Output:
Panel number | Beat purpose | Visible action | Shot type | Emotion | Hook value
Limit it to 4-6 panels.
Convert this comic script into AI-ready panel prompts:
[paste panel script]
Rules:
- preserve character anchors
- preserve location anchors
- keep prompts concise
- include shot type and emotion
- avoid readable text unless it is handled separately as dialogue
Check this panel script for continuity risks before generation:
[paste panel script]
Review:
- character appearance consistency
- location consistency
- prop continuity
- camera flow
- dialogue clarity
- final hook strength
Return a short fix list and a revised script.
在生成画面之前,检查你的脚本:
注意这些问题:
如果脚本形式看起来就已经混乱,那么生成之后通常只会更混乱。
本系列的下一篇文章是 生成漫画页面。该指南会把这份分镜脚本转换成完整的视觉漫画页面。
上一步:漫画世界构建
从第 1 天开始:如何开始一个漫画故事
当你准备好生成第一版视觉草稿时,请从这里开始: